We wrote these poems in the fall to go with beautifully designed suns we created after being inspired by Chumash artwork.

We wondered what it would be like to actually be the sun!

Sun Poem

I am the shining sun.
I live in the solar system.
Black is my madness.
Black is my panther pajamas.
My job is to keep people up and going.
Pluto is my baby sister.
I visit O'Ryan Belt.
My favorite holiday is the solar eclipse.
I spin and twirl
I keep the world alive.

By Emily


I am the super sweating sun.
My job is to sweat the earth and keep the planets warm.
My friends are out every night.
They always glow like the light.
My family is everywhere.
I can't get wherever they are.
One of them is very warm.
It is very orange.
Two of them have a ring.
It is sort of pink.
One of them is very, very cold.
But it never gets old.

By Chase


The Powerful Sun

I am the powerful sun.
My favorite colors are my great fiery red,
My super dooper yellow,
My really mad and angry blackness,
And my steam-rising powerful orange.
I wear a really red and orange jersey.
My job is to make the earth grow
And to help living things.
The stars are my parents.
The planets are my brothers and sisters. I am friends with everybody.
I travel to the long, long, Milky Way
And to the humongous dipper.
I travel with really big jetpacks
And they are big all right
I live in the universe with everything in it, too.

By Emerson


I am the summer sun.
I live above the clouds.
My job is to keep the people warm.
I wear a hot red t-shirt.
The stars are my friends.
My favorite holiday is Sunny Day.
My yellow is my happiness.
My black is my anger.
On vacation I go see the clouds.
I move by the air.

By Julia


I am the hot sun.
I live in the white fluffy clouds
And the stars at night.
My job is to keep the sun beating all day long.
My favorite colors are the blue sky,
The red flaming hot sun,
And the black birds flying all around me.
My vacations are to visit my grandpa and
grandma and my other family.
My favorite holiday is Friend Day because
You get to play with your friends all day long.

By Krista


I am the sun in space.
I live in outer space.
My favorite colors are yellow, red and orange.
I like to wear a yellow and black t-shirt.
I wear red pants.
My job is to keep earth warm.
My mom is Venus and my dad is Pluto.
I go to Jupiter for my vacation.
My favorite holiday is Halloween
because it is fun.
How I move is I fly.

By Kassy


I am the sun!

I live next to the sea.
I like yellow for my shirt.
I wear a yellow shirt with S on it.
I shine for people.
The stars are my friends.
I go to Pluto with my Grandma.
I like Sunday with my shine.

By Jackie


Keto the War Sun

My outer layer is my army and enemies.

My next layer has my smaller army.

My middle layer is a wall
That is biochemically altered
To protect my core.

Those two armies
And biochemically-altered wall
Are to protect my core
Because my core is the universe.

I am the sun
That contains all the other suns within me.

By Mason


I am the sun.
I live in the clouds
My favorite colors are
orange because of warm fire,
red because of fighting,
black because of PJs and
yellow because of warmth.
I like lots of colors.
I like to let kids play from my bright shine.
My friends and family are the star and moon.
I like to go anywhere for vacation.
My favorite holiday is any holiday.
I glide when I move.

By Grace


Shining bright always
Umbrellas block
No one hates the sun
Sun helps us

Antarctica doesn't get very much
Running gets you sweaty from the sun
Earth is smaller

Fun when it shines
Unexpected I don't like
Not cold at all

By Spencer


I am the sun.
My gold-yellow jacket sparkles.
My brothers and sisters are the stars.
I live in the galaxy.
My job is to bring warmth.
I move all around the galaxy.
I am very hot.
My little brother is the moon.
I travel to the other planets.
I never see Antarctica.
I love my rays of light.
I make very hot flames.

By Clay


I am the shining sun,
Living in the heavens far, far away in sky.

I shine on the plants and people on earth.

I am the waves of the sky.

The moon depends on me
To keep it warm at night.

That is why it shines so beautifully
Day and night.

Always the same.

By Zevy


I am the sun.
I live in the sky with the clouds.
My red is for hot peppers.
I like to wear clouds to keep me hot.
My job is to make it shine.
My family is the moon and the sun.
My best friends are the stars.
I go to my sisters and brothers.
My birthday is to keep my happy.
I fly in the air.

By Melina


My Sun

I am the sun
I live on the bottom of Uranus.
My favorite color is flaming hot red.
I like to wear my flaming, beaming red P.J.s.
My job is to keep people warm 24-7.
Uranus and Neptune are my brothers and sisters.
Pluto is my best friend.
For vacation, I go to Pluto.
My favorite holiday is Solar System Day.
I move with my hot steam!

By Ramin


I am the funny sun.
I live with the stars in outer space.
My red is my hottest place.
That is where I work and keep people warm.
My black is my coldest place.
My yellow is in between.
That is when it is cold and warm outside.
I travel around the universe.
I am out when it is daytime,
And the moon is out when it is nighttime.

By Jasmine


I am the bright flamey, crispy star sun.
I love brightness.
My favorite holiday is Sun Holiday
Because it is so sunny.
It is even sunny in the solar system.
I move by floating and rolling.
For vacation, I go to vacation on Mars.

By Gregory


I am the sweating sun.
I live in the North Star.
I wear red, yellow and orange-red shirts.
I make everything bright.
The stars are my family and friends.
I live in the dark sky.
My favorite holiday is Sun Christmas.
I move by flying on the jetpack.

By Josh


I am the only sun.
I fly across the sky.
I dance ballet.
I wear a yellow dress with red dots.
I keep the world alive.
The stars are my friends and family.
I live with the stars.
Yellow is my happiness.
On vacation, I go to the Milky Way.
My favorite holidays are Sunday,
Sunmon, Sunrun and Suncam.
I am the sun.

By Catherine


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